
I've always liked this because (although technically there'd have to be a hyphen) it reads to me like "two-horse carriage" or "five-picture deal." You know—like two kings live on this street? Yeah, you get it. (It's actually an
address.*)

I haven't seen the untampered-with ad, but still I feel comfortable stating as fact that this version is much better.
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